The Components of a Broadcast Story

1.Topic: Cross country and homecoming

2.Focus statement: Cross country team runs ball far

3.Sound bites:our cross country team holds traditions very dear to us

4.B-Roll: Running on the highway(over head shot), Leaving the high school

5.Stand up: telling us the team almost forgot the ball.

6.Editing

Make it Memorable #2

One thing I found interesting about the reading is how you want to make your news story interesting enough that viewers at home do not want to change the channel. Another thing i found interesting is that you want to use at active voice and not bore your audience to death. You want to make sure it is energetic enough that the viewers are engaged. Finally the last thing i found interesting is it is good to have surprises in your stories to keep the viewer watching and wanting to know what is going to happen. Something that I disagree with is being conversation 
I personally feel that's awkward and I do not really think people want to see that. 


I think in the story about the twin boys it had a lot of conversations. A lot with the dad and how the boys felt during the event. It really showed what was going on and it gave a mental picture of what was happening. Another aspect used was action voice it really had a tone that made you want to keep reading the article and wanting to know what was going to happen next. Final aspect used in my opinion is surprises, it showed how the boys got the money for winning the shot, but how later it surprised me that they wanted to give the money back to the organization.

For the news story about the football players is had the aspect of how to defeat the TV remote control. It had you engaged and made you want to keep watching. It was interesting how they started with why the mom was crying which lead you to keep watching. Another aspect is the active voice. The reporter was able to have a active voice and make things sound interesting and make you want to keep watching. He had a sense of humor that en-lighted the story. Final aspect is surprises you would of never imagined the women had 12 kids and all of them were boys, and play football. I could not believe it my self. Especially since each one of them played football at the same school from first born to last born.

Stand ups

1. What is the lead in this story? Does it intrigue you to keep watching?
Something strange could happen in a quiet neighborhood

2. What are the 5W's of this story: Who, What, Where, When, Why
Who: Neighborhood
What: Someone broke into her house through dog door
Where: A quiet neighborhood, 31st and juilian
When: about 2 weeks
Why: To rob and steel things

3. Give an example of the reporters Voice over or seque (Write it down word for word)
 When the house is being shown in the begining he is talking. When anything is being showed like the dog door he is being voiced over.

 4. When do we see the reporter's stand-up? Beginning, Middle, or End?

 Towards the end

5. What is the purpose of this reporter's stand-up?Showing that he is  moving to another spot.


Stand up

• Move story forward
• reporter becomes B-roll
• take me to the scene
• use props
• be creative and surprise us

 

Video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lm9bU_gJrfI
 

Make It Memorable by Bob Dotson

1. What do you notice about the way he writes? Use specific examples, please. (75 words)

I noticed that he adds in a bit of humor in his writing to entertain the reader. Also he is straight about what he is talking about. He does not confuse the reader in his writing.It is a very easy read. you can understand everything. And he uses great detail and visual detail to explain what he wants.


2. What did you learn from reading pages 9 to 27? (75 words)

I learned you have to remember the rules of three which is when interviewing frist of they tell you want you want to hear. Second they explain their answer and third they blurt out a sound bite. I also learned that silence is okay it makes the person unccomfortable that the continue to talk and that is when you get the most out of an interview. Finally I learned non- questions and questions where you ask question and you also answer them as the person is talking.


3. With the scripts: What do suppose is described in each column? Why would it be split like that? What else is interesting about the scripts? (50 words)
  

One the side of the scripts is what each shot is going to take place and also what will be in the footage. I think it is spilt like that to show how long each thing is before moving to the next thing. To give you different shots of everything. I think it is interesting that they have that to guide them as they film and interview. It really comes in handy when you are interview. And also that they have a varity of things like showing pictures, talking to different people. It is all different and moves smoothly.


4.On Page 34 (and to the end of the section), Dotson writes about a long-form feature. Find one of these (a story at least 4 minutes long) on a TV news magazine such as Rock Center, 20/20 or 60 Minutes. Then, give and explain examples of how the storyteller uses the five bulleted traits Dotson gives on Page 34. (200 words)

• Scene ~In the scene it takes place in California. They way they show it is by doing a wide shot of the new reporter infront of the beach. They set the scence by explaining what happened. The shots consited of pictures of the wowmen and the family
• foreshadowing~ They showed foreshadowing by telling what happned to the women. but they left you thinking of why she went missing.
• conflict ~ The conflict is a women is found after 11 years . Peoples though she was dead and  turn to be not true
• character growth ~ For Character grownth was the woman came back after 11 years to return with her family
• resolution ~ The Resouluting is tbe women returned home after traveling with the homelesss for 11 years.

Changing Identity

1. Identify and explain as many WALLDO shots as you can.

• angles shot~ of the piano
• low shot~ playing with the dog,walking down the stairs
• depth~ the toaster
• linking shot~ the windchine
• oposite~ him behind the toaster

2. What is Natural Sound?
what we naturally hear in the enviornment


3. Identify several examples of Natural Sound in this story?

• Scraping of the knife
• dog backing
• toaster
• leaves crunching
• wind

4. How does Natural Sound enhance the story?

makes it feel like you are there with the person

Walldo notes

• wide shot...set the scene  
• angeled shot...make your eyes go somewhere else
• low shot...get down
• linking shot... can tell two storied in one shot
• depth... Making somthing 3d
• opposite... action/reaction